Dirkin - Enjoyable start. I agree there should be more. I feel that this could really go anywhere you want it to. Is he a vampire? A psycho who's scared of the dark? whatever you want to have him be, you're leaving this with a lot of potential
In Memory of my sis Xiamara Pathenopaeus (Simi Parthenopaeus Origins) aka Shay Ware that passed away 11/01/2018. I've taken her name here. You are much loved. I shall never forget you. Deviantress